Thursday 26 July 2018

Reading goals term 3

my goal is to predict the out of what is happening

writing goals

my goal for term 3 is spell much harder and longer words 




T4:  My goal for all of Term 4 is to improve at spelling because I need to spell harder and longer words in more sentences.

Wednesday 30 May 2018

persuasive letter

Dear Mr Macmillan,

We are writing to you because we know wheels would be the best Idea for our extra Goldentime.


In fact it will be a great Golden Time activity because it grows our muscles and will make us stronger. This will help us get ready  for sports. In fact if we get stronger then we can ride faster on our wheels and you know going faster is more fun, right? Growing stronger doesn’t have to end at Golden Time, it can help us with all activities, even outside of school.


As you can see it also makes you fitter, it makes you faster and run longer we can get better. Being fitter will even help us learn better. It helps you with events like cross country and the mini marathon and athletics day and swimming sports.


Also because it is super fun, because everyone will like it, School is meant to be fun and because practice makes permanent. Most people will like it because it is also the great outdoors and because you will get vitamin D.


We  acknowledge that not everyone will want to do wheels for Goldentime but we are sure once they are on their wheels they will love it and think it is awesome.


Surely we have now convinced you that wheels would be the best idea for goldentime. Pretty please with a cherry on top choose our idea.

Your sincerely

Your favourite students Jayden and  Jett